Creative writing

In 2057 (intense music plays)

Life will be changed. Cars won’t drive they will hover. Computers will be holograms and everybody will have Iron Man suits. There will be no oxygen and you will have to buy artificial oxygen. because there would be no more plants. Crime would happen so often, guns would be lasers instead of bullets. The army would be “an Iron Legion”(Iron Man movie). Nothing would be the same. I think schools would not be a thing and knowledge would just be put in your head at birth. You could walk and talk in the first hour of being born.

 

Guy:

 

I was drafted into the army in Israel when I was 18 they gave me my suit, IT WAS AMAZING! It was hard to learn how to fly in it but I got the hang of it. I got my battle training, I learned how to shoot the lasers, and it was hard. One day when I was in flight training I realized there was no one else it was my and the trainer I was going to get promoted in mid-air, I started to do my best moves and tricks I did a flip I hit all the targets first try. But then…

 

To be continued…

2 thoughts on “Creative writing

  1. Hi Ethang4,
    I really loved your 2057 blog post it was so interesting. I really like how you think babies with being injected with knowledge in the first hour of being born or that everyone just has Iron man suits. However, when you said my and the trainer you probably meant, the trainer and I. Besides that, you did amazing keep up the good work.

    Sincerely Zoebk.

  2. Hi Ethang4!

    Cool blog! I really like your detail of the future and I really liked that story at the end. Maybe next time put some more commas like where it said “Cars wont drive it will hover, Computers will be holograms”. Overall I really like this blog its well done. Do you think that there will be secret schools?

    Well done!

    -Hayes1

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